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| Cinera 2007-07-06 ch 1,  | abuseOh.My.God. First let me start of by saying I absolutely love the structure of this poem, it flows so magnificently throughout the entire poem. I love the metaphor of the closet/wardrobe/bureau-drawer, and the straight uniforms of formality. It really portrays the effort of coming out as not something you wake up one day and decide to do. The intricate details of coming out is shown through the intricate detail of this poem. I can't put enough praise on it. I love it. Thank you for showing the world something so beautiful. |
| SerialXLain 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI like it... The repition at the beginning of the verses is really cool and the end is so...uplifting with the colors and the mirror coming back. xo |
| Osunale 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThis brilliantly captures hiding and despair brought to an inspiring conclusion. Excellent work. |