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| peace etc 2008-02-01 ch 3,  | abuseI really love all your stories. this one is amazing. I'm at uni in Canada, so I find the verisimilitude of your story is so great. definitely can identify with it. it's so realistic. I hope you do get a chance to continue it. I know how hard it can be with classes and everything! but, it's definitely an awesome story. |
| PINKGAZER1990 2007-11-02 ch 3, | abuselove it love it love it! i need more! amazing keep going =]=]=]=] |
| PINKGAZER1990 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseso far i really love this story and ive only read one chapter! but like the rest of your stories i bet its going to be amazing =] i cant wait to get out of school and get home to read the rest. =]=]=]=] |
| LachelleMarie 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseheheh i like this story so far it also helps that sasha is my first name hehe. Update soon! |
| Blue Vampire 2007-04-13 ch 3, | abuseHmm... I'm not really sure I understand much of what is going on just yet... I'll read the next chapter when you post it though. But I have to say, dear god! What is with you and bringing alcohol and more then a little swearing in your stories?! Jeez! I must be missing out on something... seriously. I've had two shots of whiskey and then various sips of wines and my brother's rum and coke drink... but those weren't during the best of times... extremely ** family times actually... but that's too depressing to mention in a review. Anyways, yeah, I'm not exactly sure what to say. I dunno... I'll have to read the next chapter when you get it written and posted. |
| becxfok01 2007-04-01 ch 3, | abuseLove the beginning of the story. Pls continue it! |
| dee 2007-03-26 ch 3, anon. | abusein your profile, you mention that you have 4 stories on the go.. i'm assuming they are miles, romeo and juliet, mirrabooka and whenever it rains. so, savannah is over? it just didnt seem like it was over and i loved that story best so i'm kinda bummed. hope its not over. unless you're being extremely realistic and rabbit and savannah never meet each other again.. next time u update, whichever story u update, can u put it at the bottom of the story or smthin, whether savannah is over? thanks and great work |
| cake 2007-01-31 ch 3, anon. | abusehey dude! lovin your new story... I'm hooked and now there isn't any more to read!! write more and have fun at uni this year! Caitlin |
| diamondewdrops 2007-01-25 ch 3, | abuselol. funny he undressed her? hes hot and all, but seriously, wasnt there a girl around to help? haha that horny bunny. XD |
| A.R. 2007-01-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseI read Whenever It Rains and the other Ben/Hailey stories so I'm really excited for this story. It's starting out great. |
| FutureWriter 2007-01-24 ch 3, | abuseAw, poor Lucas. He's moody, but rightfully so. I hope he doesn't still have feelings for his ex, though. And he was sweet the way he took care of Sasha. I'm totally hooked and love your fast updates. Keep writing! |
| Luv-TU 2007-01-24 ch 2, | abuseI like it!! |
| Ariannette 2007-01-23 ch 3, | abuseI love it! it's fantastic! please update it again soon! also you should update when it rains! liam should have like his own story! like totally! he's such an awesome character! |
| Paraphernalia 2007-01-23 ch 3, | abuseTotally wicked story so far! I'm hooked on R&J: Revisited as well. Your an AMAZING author, it's a shame you live in AU, so far from USA. But in any case, keep writing I love your work and read it immediately. Take care! |
| In.the.Wardrobe 2007-01-23 ch 3, | abuseoh... very interesting so far :P i'd love to read more :P i cant wait for an update. |