I really like the story, it was a bit confusing at first thinking she was blind then how she still saw, it wasn't until the end I realized she was colorblind. But I supposed I should have thought of that with how she described everything as light or dark instead of white or black. Good work.

I really loved this story! You know, it makes you really thankful for what you have - I have always thanked God, though, for the eyesight I have. I depend on it so much, and it always breaks my heart and touches me whenever I read stories like this. You did a great job with it, too, with the emotions involved with it.

However, I am a bit confused about the sun thing. So, she can see the sun, and bright lights, right? But she's still blind. And I think it's so sad that seh doesn't even comprehend the word "see."

Yay! Sarika's back. Anyway, what a beautiful, eloquent story. There's a couple different theories I have about Naida's character, and I like how you left it open for intepretation. Will's a great character, very jittery and warm. Interesting you named the teacher Mrs. Keller. Overall, this piece works really well and sticks with you. *faery tragedy

So she's not really blind?
Aside from the confusion (which I think is intentional) I think you did quite a good job with this story, excellent in fact.
I enjoyed it, you have a very pleasent writing style, that really stands out above the rest.