Really powerful-- sad, but powerful. I actually would like to see more of this, if you ever decided to develop it from a one-shot, though it's good as is, too. But I really want to know about the girl who died, and all their relationships...

Wow.. that was really, really sad. And depressing. Well-written, though!

Wonderfully done Maianess.

And yes, I do have a fictionpress account. Tell No one. /glares.

-Molly

Well, that was cheerful. :)

bec

Wonderful, wonderful! *claps* Absolutly brilliant, I dont know who could have done that better! The emotions, the detail...
I think I almost cried when reading that.
Almost.

wow, i don't know ANY nerds named Luke with dirty blond hair that juggle...

other than that, i thought this was good. a lot of harsh feelings, and the descriptions were really good. just might want to change the name, though.