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lovefantasyworkreality
2008-10-07
ch 56,
abuseI have a confession... I liked it better the other way, where Charlie left and Keiran went after him. Not like I have any say in what happens. I just liked it the other way better.
Elle Winters 9
2008-10-05
ch 6,
abuseyour welcome =)
Claudia
2008-09-20
ch 61, anon.
abuseWow, I absolulty loved this story!

It was one of the best stories i have ever read!

I can't wait to read the Sequel!
Claudia
2008-09-19
ch 34, anon.
abuseWow, i really love this story.

I actually believe that Ophelia dieing adds a good amout of drama into the story, so in other words i don't really think u dud anything wrong.
PegasusWings
2008-07-12
ch 10,
abuseawesome story.. love it!
XxlilyxX
2008-07-02
ch 4, anon.
abusehey hey! i'm really liking your story! what i have read so far is light and fluffy, kinda like a kitten...hehe just kidding but yeah i really like it alot!!
aussie-crazy-banana
2008-06-17
ch 17,
abuseIM REALLY REALLY REALLY SORRY! i love your writing! and i just thought that it was a story you had written (like a fanfic of naruto), i never meant that i thought you had stolen it! I love your writing and im sorry for offending you, that was really not my intention. please forgive me...?
:(
aussie-crazy-banana
2008-06-17
ch 5,
abuseomg is this a "generalafied" version of a Naruto fanfic? coz it sounds familiar...
Twilight fan
2008-06-05
ch 30, anon.
abuseIm going insane because i want them to finally get together (Caomhe and keiran). So now im currently sleep deprived because I started around 10 pm and it is currently 5 am and im not going to sleep until i finish this! ;p
xHopeLesSdReaMeRx
2008-05-22
ch 61,
abusewow! i just finished reading your story.. i LOVE it.. really!! it's kinda long.. but it's okay:)
and i'm laughing at every chapter.. even my brothers think that i'm mad.. normally, if i'm reading i just keep quiet but i can't help it.. it's just so funny:)
some parts are confusing though.. like the flashbacks or the things that i think are those that happens in the future..
congratulations, anyways.. it's the BESTest story i've ever heard:D
Murphy's Lawyer
2008-05-05
ch 61,
abuseAw, that was awesome. Yay happy ending, although it was KINDA difficult to follow.

Can't wait for Duct Tape.. etc., etc.

I now have to do dishes at a freakish speed before my dad comes home from work and catches me. BYE!

- ML
Murphy's Lawyer
2008-05-05
ch 57,
abuseNOO!

I'm pushing curfew and risking eternal hell by continuing to read, so there dang well BETTER be a good ending!

- ML
Murphy's Lawyer
2008-05-05
ch 55,
abuse*le gasp*

CHARLIE CAN'T MOVE!! DON'T LET IT HAPPEN, CLEMENTINE! NO!

and.. Adam... and... Celia? Ew.

- ML
Murphy's Lawyer
2008-05-05
ch 52,
abuse*laughs while clutching stomach*

Whoo, good thing noone's home, cause I just laughed like a maniac for 10 minutes straight while I read that... hehe.

Moving on, and munching the ice cream cake.. yeesh, at this rate I'm not gonna fit into my prom dress next weekend!

*considers*

I'll take my chances. It's good ice cream cake.

- ML
Murphy's Lawyer
2008-05-05
ch 51,
abuse*cackles madly*

Qzie, that was AWESOME! LOVED IT!

Woot! Kick Milo's -

um.. I better keep reading now. *grins*

*grabs cake* As Marie Antoinette (supposedly) said, "Let them eat cake!"

- ML
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