This is a really great and sweet story! I'm glad that I clicked on it and read it! I love it!

Personally, I liked the first one, where you split it into three parts.

Incidentally, I'm taking on NaNoWriMo this year.

When I saw this on the email I was like o.O what? Now I understand.

I personally think that the pastness/futureness should be cut, so as to have the whole story as it was meant to be read. If you really think about it, it's redundant. It works for FP, to keep people hooked and such, but I don't know if it would do the same in an actual, official book.

However, I think you should split it anyway, just for size/expense purposes.

Those are my opinions, anyway. I'll totally buy, whenever you come out with it. By the way, is WWID out yet?

'Til next,
CD 1.0

dude, I love that you used my suggestion for the title "At the Swing Sets", soo sick. Anyways, I think you should go for splitting it in two sections, and the first end with the pact. I know it would make the second book really long, but I;m up for that. And I seriously think I'm going to buy this book when it's available. So keep us updated.

reminds me of me and brad... the kid literally stalks me, i swear. he hasn't attempted to hug me since last year, because of a certain incident involving my fist and his face, resulting in a black eye and a bloody nose in just one hit... thats what he gets for pissing off a strong girl...

Its a good story so far but im more into the older ones.. or in hghschool instead of middle.. good job though

this is one of my faveourite stories on fiction press:)
i love it so much!
it had me in tears and some parts...
your a really talented writer:)
x

I have a confession... I liked it better the other way, where Charlie left and Keiran went after him. Not like I have any say in what happens. I just liked it the other way better.

your welcome =)

Wow, I absolulty loved this story!

It was one of the best stories i have ever read!

I can't wait to read the Sequel!

Wow, i really love this story.

I actually believe that Ophelia dieing adds a good amout of drama into the story, so in other words i don't really think u dud anything wrong.

awesome story.. love it!

hey hey! i'm really liking your story! what i have read so far is light and fluffy, kinda like a kitten...hehe just kidding but yeah i really like it alot!!

IM REALLY REALLY REALLY SORRY! i love your writing! and i just thought that it was a story you had written (like a fanfic of naruto), i never meant that i thought you had stolen it! I love your writing and im sorry for offending you, that was really not my intention. please forgive me...?
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omg is this a "generalafied" version of a Naruto fanfic? coz it sounds familiar...