Aw this is so sad! Full of emotion beautifully expressed. Great write.

It's not a bad poem. I like the idea, but there's a few things I would suggest. Change the me's to I's. I think you should also make the second end of the first line (times when I'm down...) another line. I like the time after time line, it's very "the tide rises, the tide falls"esque.

that is a very common case which you illustrate in your poem and even though we hate to admit it we still love the person that hurts us and the way you put it in your poem it tells it like how many of us feel...that was a very good poem.

aww... that sucks. not your poem (the poem definitely did not suck), but the situation. it's always distressing when you're dealing with something like that. but the best you can do is just hope, and wait and see what happens...

well... anyways (sorry for the rambling)... the poem was good. i like how you switch between the lines, like "me who loves you/ you who hurts me without knowing it"... it's good, and i like that you don't just stick with "me" and "you", you do it with the "your love that burns like a fire/ fire that burns me". it was a great poem.