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pennameRo 2007-01-20 . chapter 1
Nice one. I love the abject, sketchy tone to this. Reflects the story and characters well.
Brinneh 2007-01-19 . chapter 1
sad and endearing.

a good twist would have been if Sacha was alive, but she thought he was dead; then that subtle overdose would have been simply tragic. just an idea.

i love the tone of this. it's so apathetic and reflective. simple facts about complicated emotions and situations.

wonderful.
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