 spiderfly 2007-04-02 . chapter 1Your poetry gives that feeling that all good poems should give... a gasp, a desperate grasp for a way to articulate this feeling. Utterly captivating. |
 Infinite Smiles 2007-02-17 . chapter 1Simple... and perfect. |
 Midnight In Eden 2007-02-05 . chapter 1I really quite like this.
Your line breaks are superb at giving this a fantastic flow.
Short and biting. Very nice work.
.:midnight:. |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2007-01-25 . chapter 1Oh my God. This is going on my favorites. I just love the biting tone of this, how you've taken the idea of someone eating their words and put an entirely new twist on it. I love your verb usage in this and the personification of the words by them having tails...It's just fantastic. Keep writing! :) |
 Moondog Dozier 2007-01-23 . chapter 1Oh, this is marvelous. The tone speaks volumes. The way that it gets to the point so poignantly that the reader is thrust into the allusion to conversations past. Very relatable. Great write. MD:77. |
 Anaare 2007-01-21 . chapter 1A bit shorther than I'm used to (wait a minute...), but no less wonderful and mesmerizing. A beautifully descriptive poem, that I have enjoyed. |
 shelina 2007-01-19 . chapter 1Short, simple, beautiful. I love it the way you portrayed the words as geometric shapes [Am I right? Or am I just blabbering like an idiot? Haha.] I really love this. Perfect. C: |