Wow...just so good. It was a little exhausting to read(in a good way) because there was just so much to think about in this poem. Gorgeous, it really is.
-Colleen
That was amazing. A few odd rhymes here and there, but they still worked, and I wouldn't change anything about it if I were you. The title works perfectly by the way.
This is definitely my favorite poem out of all the ones I read from you.
"But memories are stronger than feelings"
I totally agree, and it gave the whole thing such a... I don't know, such a poetic and beutiful tone. I absolutely loved it!