angsty but really cute. i loved it.

I liked it. Personally, I didn't think it was that angsty. I guess I wouldn't really know, since I don't really read much angsty stuff. i liked the repetitiveness. Its kind of a sad, depressing poem though. I guess that would make it angsty. But I still liked it a lot. It was kind of sweet.

Yes, that is quite angsty, and slightly repetitive, but on a good note, it does get the emotion across nicely! Keep it up.

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