Reviews for The Month of the Lion

the kitten 2008-03-22 ch 2,	abusehey, I think you should continue this! The beginning is good, and your style also.
Erisah Mae 2007-03-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseyou call this complete?
JennieMR 2007-02-27 ch 2,	abuseRayne, have I ever told you that you are a fantastic writer?? This story is very interesting, and I sincerely hope you continue with it! It reminds me of your other one... stone circles... but I like this one better so far. :-) NOt that both aren't extremely well written, but I like the fact that the girl's mom didn't die- she was just taken away. So that leaves the question of whether she will ever be reunited with her sister and mother. Well done!
sekhmet's-child 2007-01-20 ch 2,	abuseI quite like this, but a little more about the time would be good - what the buildings are like, what they wear, what they eat, etc. etc. I know it wasn't really possible in these two chapters, but I'd like to see more of it in the next ones. As I said, I like this so far - I look forward to the next update.
electric feel 2007-01-20 ch 1,	abusenot including the dialogue, you might want to edit some of this to reinforce the time period..? but i like it