aw gosh this is too sweet. i totally know the feeling of having a best friend leave.. maybe not in the same way but yeah. definitely on the favourite stories list, you got a gift with song-making :-)

Once again, a wonderful piece! You're so good at finding the right words!
You make it so clear how you feel, with the words you chose. It's so easy to see in front of you. Keep it up and write more!
The Reverse Edge Blade

It's sad that even though we lose what is most important to us, we must continue to move on. Losing someone is perhaps one of the most painful experiences a person goes through during his or her lifetime.

This poem means a lot to me, because right now I can totally relate. I read this song and thought immediately of one of my best friends.

Despite the twinge of sadness I now feel, great work.

Alas, life goes on...
I'm not sure if the "yeah, yeah" in the second to last line adds anything. But still, good job on this one. Thanks for reviewing, and keep writing.

Very moving, and I only wish it were to music. It can be connected to many people's lives at one point or another.
BTW, thanks for the review.

~Amanda R.

Wow, this is really good. Very emotional. I could feel so much. Plus I can relate. Brilliant. Always be positive, and keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^