i absolutely love this story. i dont think you should change a thing... accept the shortness of it... i really hope you continue it and soon,. im dieing to find out whats next. oh and did i mention I F*IN LOVE THIS STORY!

NYAH! Hahahaha. Now, watch Cody get ubar close with Sidney andGriff get jealous and oh. I likey. I likey majorly.
Update soon!
And see told ya I would read it all.

I love this, and knowing me, I should stop NOW before it gets any later and I am up all night reading. Will finish later though. FOR SURE.

i think the rating is fine where it is...once they don't have sex. im actually hoping they don't--i don't read M rated stories(im lame...i know xD)so im hoping you don't change it.

I don't believe dakota is too girly. at all. just...soft. there are guys like that.

Um...what the HELL happened with giffin?!? man, im sorry, but that was like a slap to the face. seriously. i wasnt expecting it. at all. im getting the feeling like he's afraid he wont be good enough for dakota or something. like theyll end up like him and sidney...idk. but that just felt weird. i would feel so totally used and weird knowing someone i was making out with and hanging around didnt want to be in a relationship with me(not that ive had many of those...>>)but thats just me.

the story is unfolding more but i hope its not one of those stories where bad things just keep happening and new problems just keep arising for the main character every few chapters. personally, i dislike stories like those. i think it should have a beginning, middle and end, where there's one big plot in the behind story and everything is happening to reach the end point.

yeah...and you probably didnt even need to know all that...

but don't get me wrong i love this story. i think your characters have depth, despite your doubts lol, and they all have distinctive personalities and dont all blend together. i remember you were expressing concern about matt and adriana's personalities being non-existant and...i honestly think thats okay. theyre there but arent they sort of kinda background..? they dont need much depth...i think, heh. but anyhoo, pretty awesome work so far. im glad i found it and stuff. i was actually pondering its events during school today...told my friend about it too..

yeah, so this review has been going on really long now...to imma end it, hehe. i cant argue with the slow updates as i do the exact same thing. but in my case its more laziness than anything else...that and lack of inspiration...xD

but, okay, im talking(writing?) again so im going to stop. like right...NOW.

Hurry up with the next chapter you slow, slow person! PLEASE! I love this story so much and if there isn't a new chapter soon I think I am going to die, and if I do; I want you to remember that it is all your fault :'(

Whoa!!
What's d matter with Griffin? Such a jerk! So he's juz playing around??
I hate him, I hate him!!
B, but..
I love him too *bloodtears*
Sidney's nice, but dont let him get in their way. Im not fond of slash triangle love, seriously.
And that Charlotte! Is she dating Tony? Whoa, I cant wait for the next chapter!! Please, dont turn my Griffy into a jerk later~

Update! T-T

This is freaking angtsy romantic that I want to read more! I love Dakota, Sydney and Griffin's character! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!

OMG! I love this story and I really, really hope that you plan on updating soonish.

I personally think you should up the rating to M just to be honest! I love this story so far!! I like read all the chapters in an hour! It's really easy to see and feel what the Dakota is feeling. Please update soon!

on a more serious note, i get the feeling that this story has just begun. i don't know if you were aiming for that. in the sense that you've created these wonderfully complex problems and we are NOWHERE near the end. and i have this horrible nagging fear that you'll end all of this abruptly or something, so don't. please take your time and stretch out the characters and develop sidney's character, and we want all of the back story and everything! please. if you end this in like 3 chapters, i'll be unhappy (unless they are abnormally long). work at it, know you're appreciated! keep it up.

ah! the deliciously scrumptious love triangle narrows! where are you going with this?! omigod, do not give up on this. this is most intriguing - too intriguing. i swear, after all you've written and all of this plot-thickening, i have to say that i am most interested in what has yet to happen. what a page-turner. really.
so, uh, sidney or griffin, huh... :D choose wisely...haha.

Id like to see more sydneyxgriffin background idk why but it sounds like a really cute story gone horribly wrong =]

I really like this chapter! I think its so realistic and I personally really like the way Cody is so cautious and serious about his relationship with Griffin. On the other hand, I like how playful Griffin is. I find it interesting that although Griffin has acted like he wants to go out with Cody and they've been acting as though they are without declaring it, he says that he isn't actually ready to go out with Cody. Hmm, I wonder why? And, what is Cody's horrible dad up to? I have a bad feeling about him! And Charlotte, what's up with her horrible attitude. Poor Cody, if Griffin is letting him down what's he going to do? Also, I don't think Cody is too much of a girl, I think its cute how cautious and careful he is. Griffin's right it makes him more adorable. I don't think the rating should go up to M until you move past kissing and get into something like blowjobs and sex.Love your story, hope you can find the time to update soon!

AH WHERE IS THE NEXT BUTTON?! WHERE IS CHAPTER 17?! NOO I MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS. i bet griffins gunna be all awkward now andd dakota is gunna be with sidney more and more and then griffins gunna get jealous and then sidney will be all emo and YEAH. D:

me + this story = world peace

Loving it (: Bitch Griffin!! But I want Cody to be with Sid anyways so yeah