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charm en route 2008-09-28 ch 15,	abuseOh, you are definitely due for an update. :p Also, boo @ Tony
mad-one123 2008-09-12 ch 10,	abuseplease update already! wa i love this story, dakota is so fricken cute. and its nicely written!
Carus 2008-07-14 ch 15,	abuseupdate soon! Please please pleasepleasepleaseplease...
the-truth-is-verity 2008-07-08 ch 15,	abusem... so is tony turning her into a prat, then? anyway, i love the story, it rocks completely :D i cant wait for more, please update soon!
Jaded Devil 2008-07-06 ch 15,	abuseCliffhanger! I hope the issue with Tony will be resolved next chapter... By the way, I am in love with the character of Griffin. He's absolutely perfect - playful but serious when needed to be.
mad-one123 2008-06-16 ch 15,	abuseholy moly~~! im so glad i found this story! ah its flipping fantastic. love your characters, love your writing. i dont know who i want him to end up with, or who hes even going to end up with. its so hard, cos both sidney and griffin are fantastic and hawt! :)
Oki3xDoki3 2008-06-16 ch 15,	abuseI am now a fan of yours. HOLY SHIT. I think I want to do fan art for you. Don't worry, I'm not sucky.
Rainbowelectric 2008-06-09 ch 12,	abuseha, it's like I'm psychic. LOL. Yeah like it took a rocket scietist to figure out that Sid and Griffin had a history. lol I'm reading way too fast. Pretty soon I'll not have a cushion of chapters before I'm at the end waiting ravenously for the next chapter. Fortunately I have to go to work so that leaves me a couple of chapters to spare before the well has run dry. I do so love it htough. I can just imagine Griffin's reaction to Cody coming to his door and telling him off. It's not overreaction. I loved it. I mean he's fallen for him and letting down his guard and accepting that he's gay and then all of the sudden he thinks he's being played... de-lish!
Rainbowelectric 2008-06-09 ch 11,	abuseOkay, Charlotte's back on the list. What's her deal? Gr Naturally I loved the Griffin and Cody bits. Yay! They're so wonderful together. I love them. Love them love them love them. I'm guessing there's some history between Sid and Griffin, at least it feels like it, but then i dunno. I'm just guessing. No reading ahead, that's just bad form. hahaha...So I'll just keep on going waiting breathlessly for what's to come.
ftg. 2008-06-09 ch 15,	abuseI love it. It's a really good story. Really good as in flipping amazing. Just one thing, in one place you put Dakota and Sidney, and I think you meant Griffin and Sidney. But I don't know. Ignore me. I prefer Sidney. And I freaking love Griffin. Sidney is... he seems much older, and it's easy to forget that they're close in age. I don't know why I love him so much. But I do. Anyway, good story.
Rainbowelectric 2008-06-09 ch 7,	abusewants to curl up in Griffin's lap too This is absolutely lovely. Griffin is just an enigma for me. I love it. I can't wait to find out why he is the way he is, what makes him tick, what's made him not care what anybody thinks about him. I'm completely enamoured. utterly and completely. And I love Cody. He's just plain adorable too.
Rainbowelectric 2008-06-09 ch 5,	abusedear God. Griffin is relentless. Poor Cody is just miserable (sorta) It's wonderfully delicious. I absolutely love Cody's mother. It's so obvious how much she loves her kids. I love it. She's wonderful. her wit is diabolical. :p The dialogue is wonderful. And of course character interaction is terrific. I'm surprised by Charlotte's reaction to walking in on Griffin and being gay. Sorta taking me by surprise. BUT as I might have said earlier. I LOVE IT
Rainbowelectric 2008-06-09 ch 4,	abuseFinally I find what I’m looking for and pull out a small toolbox. Searching inside I quickly locate the hammer and nails. “Aha,” I mutter, snapping the box shut and dropping it onto the floor. Mom watches me amusedly as I kick several boxes out of my way and head for the stairs. “Play nice,” she calls after me, LOL...That's hilarious...he grabs a hammer, and she just yells to play nice. I love it. Absolutely hilarious. well shit. That's priceless. Poor Codes...torn between a riled up sister and the hot ppassionate ministrations of our green eyed sex monster. Lordy. I think anyone would be putty in his hands. shivers. :)
Rainbowelectric 2008-06-09 ch 2,	abuseLOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT. Wonderful wonderful wonderful. Okay, I'm babbling. But this is just way too wonderful to only say it once. Griffin and Dakota have amazing chemistry. Granted Dakota is frozen in disbelief and Griffin is an alluring green eyed sex monster, their interaction is absolutely riveting. I love that Griffin keeps calling him girlie. I'm sure it's infuriating So far I'm completely enamoured with this story. It's absolutely lovely.
Rainbowelectric 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseoh my god,I love it. I love the relationship that Charlotte and Dakota have with their mother. It's just hilarious and cute and charming. lol...Dakota looks like a girl. What a wonderfully ironic introduction for these two. I can tell I'm going to absolutely love their interaction with each other, just from this first chpater, it's going to be stellar. Anyway I had to drop a short note as I'm reading,. The dialogue is wonderful. The flow is great. And you've made me really want to keep reading, because as I said, the interaction between these two is going to be phenomenal.

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