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| Inkspilled 2008-02-09 ch 1,  | abuseaw this is so sad. interesting topic, reminds me of a mental hospital, but not just for crazy people. Really makes you think about how horrible things could get. I like it. :) |
| suicide girls and death boy... 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful its really sad and depressing but i love it that way, nice job |
| KnO 2007-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, this was fantastic! Depressing and disturbing in all the right ways. I applaud you. |
| daughterofastar 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseWoah... (before i start, i shall fave this) So - do ths type of thing REALLY happen? Anyway/Otherwise, it was very powerful and imaginitive - It was brilliant how much detail you used & how you described 451 being slowly driven to insanity. Two thumbs up, 5/5 Gold Stars, ext. |
| anon 2007-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abuse451. The temperature at which books burn. [ilovethis] |
| dolly-dear 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abuseI am, amazed. I love it. It's strange and a bit creepy. Sad, too. |
| serialxlain 2007-02-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm finaly reviewing. Whoa. I love the last paragraph so ** much. I was so transfixed during this whole story (so much so that I sat through a long LORD OF THE RINGS HELL YEAH! song that I normally can't sit through... I forgot it was playing...). It made a good story, but thinking that this actually is real is so...sick...that it almost makes me want to hate this story as much as I love it. Another thing I hated (but in a good way) was how 451 was going along with it... (Not that he had much of a choice, though, right?) How he kept saying he wouldn't "fail" and how he...deserved it or whatever. Wonderful job, my dear. I'm so jealous of your mad skills. xo |
| KageNeko 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseWow intresting...i liked it, its very strange though, good writing. keep up the good work |
| the Berserker 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abusecool! upsetting, but really cool! a gay rehab? **. *angst* |
| Midnights Scream 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThat it. That's the end? I'm a little disappointed. You should continue the story. It could be really good. :) |
| Portrait of Daybreak 2007-01-26 ch 1, | abuseI actually liked it, freaky and creepy as it is. I'm not into this kind of thing, but you write very well. :) I'm impressed. |
| xanthofile 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abusei distantly remember you talking about writing this one, and then it came! and sat in my inbox for forever. depressing and depressing-er. chemical castration. *sigh* what did happen to 356 after he was 'reported'? *just a random musing thought, not necassarily asking for an answer* |
| virginia giselle 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI really like this story. It made me sad. You're an amazing writer. |
| Vacant Reflection 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI love this! The whole atmosphere is set so perfectly, I can't get over how well this has been written! My favourite part, would have to be the very first chapter, the imagery works wonders! You have the confused state of mind written beautifully too. All in all... it's just... so good! -The Star ;D |
| heart race 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abusethat was the best thing i have read in a while thanks qt |