I reeally really love the second to last stanza.. the whole piece is wonderful... I like it from a little girls point of view.. it makes it dfferent than your typical i fake a smile poem.. awesome piece

tis a lovelehh poem

hehe

One week later, without even reading yours, I manage to write one aboutthe same thing. It all seems kind of more dangerous being from a little girl's point of view.

I love it. Must be put in the faves list. I love how the thoughts in the parentheses work well with the whole thought of the poem. Well-written.