|Reviews for The Act|
| no.peace.los.angeles 2/16/07 . chapter 1
Wow, that was quite the switch in perspective. I don't know how it all fits together, but maybe I'm just dense. Hmm. I think punctuation would help this. Keep writing! :)
| Moondog Dozier 1/21/07 . chapter 1
Interesting switch to the end line. Very visual, then philosophical. Great haiku.