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| xoxluurve 2008-11-22 ch 26, | just thought i'd drop a review :) your summary caught me. your characters made me stay. i had a feeling that Morgan wasn't truly his child, but he's adapted well to the whole daddy figure that it IS impossible to see him as anyone else to Morgan. i also like Lola's character. :) lovee the way you made her strong and the way that they've become friends. haha, and the drama totally sucks you in. Isabella can suck her toe. that cow. OK! waiting patiently for the next chapter. ohmy, and another complication with - who? Braden? why is Lola resisting him? (i mean, i know why, but stillz.) Tristan, get a MOVE ON AND GET AT YOUR EXWIFE. hahah. |
| dramaqueen89 2008-11-03 ch 26, | Okay. So I figured that the man with the two sons would be significant. And I'm guessing I'm dead on. She had dreams in a previous chapter, right? With her and twin boys and a faceless man. With Tristan and Morgan and a faceless woman. I know the faceless man is Braden Walters. So far, he's okay. No opinion yet. And the faceless woman... Hmm. Could she be the bartender? Either way, they're not going to end up together, will they? Trist and Lola. Well, the story is awesome as it is. So I trust yor judgement :D UPDATE SOON! |
| dramaqueen89 2008-11-03 ch 23, | Is it just me or is chapter 23 really not here? Its just a blank page. Nothing. |
| faithful.dream 2008-10-06 ch 26, | LOVE IT |
| vio923 2008-09-25 ch 26, | Glad to see you updated! I noticed that in my last review I said "Lola" when I mean "Isabella" -- talking about how they were good friends and that Isabella used Tristan, etc... Sorry about that. I still believe that Tristan needs to know if he is the biological father - he will always be her father -- the ties can't be broken -- but the truth does need to come out -- even for the child's sake (medical history if nothing else). Hope your writing muse is back and that you will continue to update! Love the story! |
| xx 2008-09-25 ch 26, | very well written story - i've really enjoyed it (and did so straight from the 1st to the last chapter). mature topics, realistic characters (each with their own achilles heel). please keep updating, as we readers would love to find out what happens! |
| Essevera 2008-09-23 ch 26, | nice chapter update soon |
| The Latest Plague 2008-09-23 ch 26, | i don't remember Braden at all... or whatever he believed that had offended her... but good chapter. Isabel is living up to her character and ** me off to no end. i doubt they even slept together and she just posed it to look like that, since she was pregnant and needed a safety net because that other guy didn't seem reliable. or whatever. cant really say much when he only showed up once. |
| vio923 2008-07-05 ch 25, | Tristan does need to take a DNA test. While he will always be Morgan's father he needs to know if he is her biological father. Morgan as she grows older will also needs to do -- medical history, etc... I still don't care for Tristan too much. He treated Lola badly long before he cheated. as as for Isabella -- the old saying really applies "with friends like this who needs enemies." Lola and Tristan were very close friends -- for Lola to use him such a manner is totally inexcusible. For Tristan to let her get away with that is even worse. |
| Hopelessly in Like 2008-07-05 ch 25, | i still hate tristan, but he might have been drugged that night, so i'm starting to feel a litte sympathy for him, since his supposed baby mama had a thing for him and could have set him up in an effort to get with him. update soon, just thought i should let you know that i haven't forgotten about this story! XOXO, Wannabanauthor |
| Essevera 2008-07-05 ch 25, | wow, nice chapter |
| twilightqueen16 2008-07-05 ch 6, | great awesome read mine and review |
| toffeecakesxox. 2008-07-05 ch 2, | Ooh, I am liking this story. :D ^^ Sorry my reviews are so short! |
| toffeecakesxox. 2008-07-05 ch 1, | Ouchie. Poor Lola. This is very interesting. :D |
| JusticeWriter 2008-07-05 ch 25, | Woohoo! Now we shall know the truth... |