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| emergency goose situation 2007-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseI love the last stanza SO MUCH it made me shiver. "but you’re probably too one-track-minded for nervousness anyway." and that line was a close second. how lovely. |
| Tytherpol 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abusei love this. :) |
| Lost In Context 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI like how this is a snapshot of time. It's very easy to relate to, because everyone has tried to talk with someone and been so nervous they lose their thoughts all over the place. The image of bones listening in on the heartbeat is original and captivating. I love it! |
| TryNotTo 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, truly, reading something so true and close to home - probably for everyone, at least once. |