Reviews for The Princess and the Merman

George O' Bradbury 2007-11-20 ch 1,	abuseGreat story, but there was SO MUCH CONFLICT! Poor, poor young man...but it was an awesome story!
Twilyt 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abuseThis sounds like a different version of Disney's The Little Mermaid, only that here it is the noble male merman who is in love with the noble female human. Lyric and Eric also sounds very familiar to each other... but for once, finally a King who actuall listens to his daughter. This is a nice fairytale, sounding very good even though it's short. Again, I'm not saying this is a copy of The Little Mermaid, but it bears some... strong resemblances.
Frore 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abuseEr... This sounds like something that I would read in a child's book - the dialogue is very artificial, there is no (sensory) detail, a very juvenile plot line, repeated words... If you are 10 years old and under writing this, awesome work. Thank you for spell checking?