Reviews for My Destined Adventure

Almost-human 2007-09-26 ch 1,	abuseHA! you had me laughing at the first scentance! I would't worry if I were you, you seem awsome at writing!(I'm new...DON'T HURT ME!
The Flying Chocolate Bar 2007-05-02 ch 1,	abusenice. it was kinda a cliff-hanger (which i hate) so I recomend adding more. But funny! You want to know all the cliches? Well, one's that mary-sue is beautiful and dumb. uh, the fact that the wizard told her a secret. the fact that the wizard is seemingly going to take her on a long journey... um, what else? All the guys are falling over her, oh, and that she uses gold coins. And the fact that she ignored the real wizard dude, and that she ignored the ugly messenger guy. Oh, i forgot to mention that she is THE ONE (theres never THE TWO or THE EIGHT) with the magical special power thing. And, that the wizard is wise (and knows everything). Also, of course that she is the only one who can defeat this evil Galantyiesrey character. And, that's about all i got.
xbluxmoonx 2007-01-27 ch 1,	abuseahahahah that's so funny you described a mary-sue very nicely you should go take the mary-sue litmus test and make sure you get all those points marked for her. gasp! you should make a gary-stue! lol well, i'm not sure if this was simply a short story or you're going to update, but it would be very funny if you did. and don't forget to make it completely cheesy! ^__^