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| Meg Spalding 2007-01-21 ch 1,   | Wow. What an interesting way to describe a puff of smoke. I love the imagery you put into this poem. Absolutely wonderul. ~meg~ |
| Frore 2007-01-21 ch 1, | Amazing! This is going on my favorite's list. You described things expertly, it is like I can feel the drag you were taking. |
| Smoky Bear 2007-01-21 ch 1, | nice word-play and inter-woven rhyme. very descriptive. |
| temerity 2007-01-21 ch 1, | Normally I'd dismiss this poem as being too wordy--but you've managed to pull this style off with flair. The imagery is wonderful (though smoking probably isn't the best habit to get into). I loved the flow. always write on! |