 Meg Spalding 2007-01-21 . chapter 1Wow. What an interesting way to describe a puff of smoke. I love the imagery you put into this poem. Absolutely wonderul.
~meg~ |
 Frore 2007-01-21 . chapter 1Amazing! This is going on my favorite's list. You described things expertly, it is like I can feel the drag you were taking. |
 Smoky Bear 2007-01-21 . chapter 1nice word-play and inter-woven rhyme. very descriptive. |
 temerity 2007-01-21 . chapter 1Normally I'd dismiss this poem as being too wordy--but you've managed to pull this style off with flair. The imagery is wonderful (though smoking probably isn't the best habit to get into). I loved the flow.
always write on! |