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Reviews For: Smoke Lines

Meg Spalding
2007-01-21
ch 1,
Wow. What an interesting way to describe a puff of smoke. I love the imagery you put into this poem. Absolutely wonderul.
~meg~
Frore
2007-01-21
ch 1,
Amazing! This is going on my favorite's list. You described things expertly, it is like I can feel the drag you were taking.
Smoky Bear
2007-01-21
ch 1,
nice word-play and inter-woven rhyme. very descriptive.
temerity
2007-01-21
ch 1,
Normally I'd dismiss this poem as being too wordy--but you've managed to pull this style off with flair. The imagery is wonderful (though smoking probably isn't the best habit to get into). I loved the flow.

always write on!
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