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| Alexis Albery 2007-01-21 ch 1, | Nicely done. It reminds me of a film...in a good way. At first was I wary this was going to be cliche but it kept my interest with the intense description by the narrator and good job not overusing the same vocabulary as I've seen others do with similar pieces. Cheers. |