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| Complications 2007-02-09 ch 1,   | I didn't follow the whole thing, but it left a very sad feeling with me. good work. |
| grip 2007-01-27 ch 1, | the last two lines obviously tell us the point of the poem, and that is good, because the ending should always enlighten the reader. |