This is by far the 'deepest' poem i have read from your stash and i like it. the reader can only guess what exactly you are talking about because you leave a solid sense of ambiguousness and unknown. are you talking to a friend that is lost in stupidity or are you talking to the readers of your poetry or what? i don't know, but that's fine by me. i get to make up my own meaning, which is something that enables the reader to fit your words to their liking. i like the third and fourth stanzas the most because of their profound nature. good.

Wonderful as always. However it didn't really "stand out" until I read it a second time. Not really important but it shows it has depth. Glad to see you writing more.

-TheFool