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| rain-angel03 2007-01-26 ch 1,  | i just have this picture of london in my head right now, for some reason. i don't know. i liked it, it may have been put under "angst", but i think it sounded pretty the way you described it. great rhymes, even greater word choices (I loved "Underneath a blanket of blue/ So the stars see it too/ Wearing skylight round it's curves/ as it's mirror, windows serve."). Excellent poem. |