Very beautiful, very sad, and very classical.

I love the music references, too.

your writing seems to be full of classical references, which is really unique. and i hope you keep it. because just between you and me, once you start getting influenced by other poets, your originality is hard to hold onto.

a few typos i caught- "Cara, you’re eyes" you're - your

"It seems can never" - It seems I can never

the first stanza is nice. it's hard to say why. i guess every once in a while it's nice to have a good, straightforward, honest-feeling description of things, especially things like music, which i love. and i loved the subtle rhyme in the third stanza- it felt almost unintentional.

fave line- "I would be Botticelli for you/if only I could paint. But all of me/is all I have."

very pretty.