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| madeyes61 2007-06-16 ch 1, | OMG! I loved your story so far. It holds mystery to whats going to happen next. I love how you have no idea whats going to happen next but at the same time gives you some thoughts of where you're going to take it. I really hope your going to write more even though yu haven't written in 4 months. You're a great writer and it would be a shame to stope writting now! |
| LethargicLove 2007-05-24 ch 1, | Fallon is the lord, huh? Cute. I do hope you continue to update. |
| s-pecial-lee me 2007-01-22 ch 1, | really good. my only advice is finish it! |
| Susurrent Threnody 2007-01-21 ch 1, | This could be quite good when it is complete. Nice beginning. |
| 123454321 2007-01-21 ch 1, | Interesting concept. I can't help but speculate at how it is going to end. Their diaglogue doesn't seem to match to era you have alluded to, but it is quirky and makes it easier to read. -J.A. |
| Liquid-Sorrow 2007-01-21 ch 1, | OY! I love this. It's wonderful. Beautiful beginning. I'm glad it's sort of historical times, but when they speak or think, it's sort of 21st century. haha. Good endings. Please? hehe. Update soon. -LQd |