Reviews for As Seen by a Door

rain-angel03
2007-01-26
ch 1,

ohh... a play on the old phrase "When one door closes, another opens"? That's kind of what it sounded like. I wasn't really sure what was going on, but that worked pretty well. The repetition at the end of "shut, we hear the whispers", and kind of at the very end, where it said "one of them ran away/ but never shut the door", and then that last line is kind of echoed at the end. It was good. Nice poem.

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