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Reviews For: My Hands Write a Tragedy

fatbird33
2008-09-05
ch 1,
fantastic poem. great flow and rhyming. i really liked the title to. keep it up!
half-sketched.staccatos
2007-04-19
ch 1,
konban wa

"Brilliant" is the only way to describe this poem. I've never read any quite like it; you've got a unique, creative style that I love. Okay, I've only read one of your poems; so I don't know if I like your style or if this even IS your normal style. My point is, I like this. There. Was that so difficult for me to write? Sheesh, I just can't seem to say what I think today.

My favorite part was the fact that you ended the way you started. I don't know what in specific I like about that fact, just that I do.

This was a really beautiful piece. The lines worked together nicely, and the rhymes sounded very natural, as did the beats, which I guess goes along with that. *shrug*

Never stop writing. I look forward to reading more of your works. Until then, this will be added to my 'favorites' list. :)

Gute nacht, tomodachi
-Shan-
hateandkill-D
2007-01-21
ch 1,
Cool! I really like this! Excellent job! keep it up!!
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