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| fatbird33 2008-09-05 ch 1, | fantastic poem. great flow and rhyming. i really liked the title to. keep it up! |
| half-sketched.staccatos 2007-04-19 ch 1, | konban wa "Brilliant" is the only way to describe this poem. I've never read any quite like it; you've got a unique, creative style that I love. Okay, I've only read one of your poems; so I don't know if I like your style or if this even IS your normal style. My point is, I like this. There. Was that so difficult for me to write? Sheesh, I just can't seem to say what I think today. My favorite part was the fact that you ended the way you started. I don't know what in specific I like about that fact, just that I do. This was a really beautiful piece. The lines worked together nicely, and the rhymes sounded very natural, as did the beats, which I guess goes along with that. *shrug* Never stop writing. I look forward to reading more of your works. Until then, this will be added to my 'favorites' list. :) Gute nacht, tomodachi -Shan- |
| hateandkill-D 2007-01-21 ch 1, | Cool! I really like this! Excellent job! keep it up!! |