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your scripted romance
2007-01-26
ch 1,
That's so cute. Gah. I love it.

Emily, you're so good at making me smile.
lackluster
2007-01-23
ch 1,
god, it's beautiful. makes me swoon, the thought of this scene you depict and the way you wrote it is clear and poetic.
checkerboxed
2007-01-22
ch 1,
yay.

yay.

i loved it, so much more than mine. seriously, you have talent. love the fifth stanza, and the last stanza. lovelylovelylovely. tell your mom that becca cannot wait. becca must have poems every week or she dries up.

poetry is her nourishment.
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