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| sin olvido 2007-02-25 ch 1,   | Yes, there are many angles amongst us. Obtuse or right or acute? I think you meant "angels." Ouch. |
| Weather Mage Frost 2007-01-30 ch 1, | Hey, you DO relgious poems. You have some gramatical erros though. Your poem would be better if you removed it, and then fixed it, and did it in a different style, so that it was brnad new! JUST a suggestion though, so take it or leave it, I don't care. Keep up the good work. Golly, I(ME, MOI) I, don't even write 8 pages a day, but you are prolly in a lower grade than I am, and you prolly have more time to do fun things. Never let go of that, ok? Keep on writing 8 pages a day, no matter what, ok? |