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Amindaya 2007-05-12 . chapter 1
Nice call with not telling the name. It changes the ordinariness that COULD have happened into something more extraordinary. The first few lines I thought 'This is definitely not as good as the others.' But then I got down to 'i try to say it,' and I liked the way you did that. So the ending was satisfying.
Johnathen Braun 2007-01-21 . chapter 1
wow, very sad and ver well written!
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