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| Amindaya 2007-05-12 ch 1,  | abuseI giggled. |
| randompoetry 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abusethis was so creatively done, and its true also! i love the way it was written, just everything about this. so good! |
| Midnight In Eden 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is quite cute, I love your formatting. Few little pointers, I think the first line would work better split up ie: melodrama is best captured in quotes to create a double meaning within it. Also perhaps move the last line away from the first section to emphasis it even further. Just an idea. Otherwise quite good. .:midnight:. |