Reviews for The Checklist - FictionPress.com

Tetelestai 2007-09-24 ch 1,	abuseThis is cute! I got the feeling of lightheartedness in the surface, but deeper it seems like the girl is actually confused about love and infatuation and wishes it was clear which one it was. Good job!
Amindaya 2007-05-12 ch 1,	abuseFunny...but it sort of...darn, what's the word? I'm going to say lacking, or disappointing, because it's like it really IS love, but the narrator is so focused on his checklist that he's willing to give up just because it doesn't give him the answer. Like being in true love and then asking an 8-ball or picking the leaves off of a flower and saying 'he loves me, he loves me not,' and then throwing love away because of the result of something so...insignificant. Heartwrenching. I love the sad undertones that you inject into most of your stories. On the surface, they're sweet, cute, funny...but there's a depth to them that makes them so memorable.
bayside doll 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abuseWow this was creative! I've never read anything like it. I thought it was very funny!