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| Tragic and Devastated 2007-01-25 ch 1,   | Anyway, you've heard my comments on this poem. There are a few errors... like the title which you've said before is Chain, not Chian... and anyway, little typos here and there, but otherwise, really good. i like the flow and the symplistic message of it. very nice. truthfully you're getting better Crispee. your best friend... ^^ Rakiz |