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Tippers2 2009-10-24 . chapter 20
Isabel is such a rebel, but I enjoy it. I am glad that Drake finally showed up in this chapter.
Dotyky 2009-10-24 . chapter 2
Still catching up with this, but it's an absolute joy to read. You characterize perfectly!
schoeppc 2009-09-08 . chapter 1
Wonderful story! You really did an amazing job and please be so kind and continue it.
PrincessGirl123 2009-03-21 . chapter 18
Hey, there! You have GOT to continue this story! It's becoming one of my favorites. And, you did say that this story will be finished, you gave us your word!
zagato 2009-02-28 . chapter 18
Thank you for writing! I like Drake better than Christopher and hope Drake becomes King one day and marry Isabel. Please write more.
myzteriouz 2009-02-26 . chapter 1
"Do not look for a fight with the enemy. Beg God for peace and security. But if you do end up facing the enemy, then show endurance and remember that Paradise is under the shadow of the swords."--Mahomet.

When you quote a religious figure, Please try to to convey the entire meaning and context of the quote because if only a part of it is taken without the context then it will send the wrong message.

Thank You.
M M 2009-02-25 . chapter 18
Glad to see you continue. I thought that you had given up on this story.
Tippers2 2009-02-25 . chapter 18
YAY! You finally updated. I must say I was thrilled to see the email in my inbox saying you had. Goodness when ever I think of Isabel and Christopher together it gives me the heebie jeebies. I can't picture it, but hopefully it will all work out in the end.
Itineris 2007-08-12 . chapter 1
Your ability to communicate the makings of a thrilling plot in such short length is astounding. Upon reading the first chapter, I praise you for your graceful description and elegant manner of sharing Isabel's thoughts and feelings. Well done.
Sahara Hayden 2007-08-08 . chapter 17
Sorry it has taken me so long to review! I'm on vacation and I just managed to get on a computer for more than five seconds. I really loved this chapter, espcially Isabel's moment of hesitation. Will she and Christopher be happy together? I'd like to think not, but Isabel seems to have convinced herself that she can be. I'll just have to wait and see I suppose!
Victoria 2007-08-02 . chapter 1
you passed from the father's point of veiw to the daughters to quickly.otherwise quite enjoyable keep up the work and never give up you can only get better as you grow.
Sahara Hayden 2007-07-12 . chapter 16
That's that. They're married. What will happen with Drake? I was surprised that he was the one giving Isabel away. It must've been ** him.
Please update as soon as you get back!
Sahara Hayden 2007-06-14 . chapter 15
There seems to be more to Angeline than meets the eye. I hope we can find out what is is. I loved the dress. It sounds beautiful!
Sahara Hayden 2007-06-01 . chapter 14
Huh. This is an interesting turn Isabel has taken. I wonder if Christopher will just use her to produce and heir and then fall in love with someone else. I think that Drake and Isabel should meet again... there's something going on between them.

Nice chapter, as always. I also learned a new word: egregious. I had no idea what that meant until now.

Can't wait to read more!!
Sahara Hayden 2007-05-17 . chapter 13
Seems like Isabel will keep her promise. Darn. She and Drake seem like a pretty good match. I wouldn't mind seeing them get together... :)
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