Talk about powerful. I love how well this all flowed together and how powerful everything was. Each word held an importance to the story, I think. And a tearjerker on a few levels. I was told to read this and I'm glad I was.

Oh, geez, poor Riley.
As I've expressed before, your writing is amazing. This is a lovely start, and I can't wait to see more!
(This is starlit iridescence/RoseZephyr from ffnet, btw)

lawl. LOL. i found you on fp, doodlie! > D *feels proud* oh yeah, who else would call you doodlie except... uh, yah, you know who n__n;
and damn whoever it was for taking the name 'miyori' here *sad kitten* )x
BUT WELL. okay. your fict! dammit. this is very beautifully done. o__o i must say that this is... super gorgeous. O:
i like the way you write in 1st POV. some authors can't write in 1st POV very well, and their stories like, BUG me )x gee.
but this is great ♥ i'm in love with this ;D

and oh how riley's point of view changed and all~ her life~ i liked it. nice job :DD
gee. you should update! < 3

loveya, doodlie. and i also miss you on ffnet xDD;

` MCHLV; < 3 felia.
((who else? xD))

Doodle! [Hah, first time I called you that; psst, it's me, Gee, xD] Ah! You're awesome!

Seriously, how is it that your writing astounds me even now, after I've already read it?! You're just so amazing at writing, you know that? The way you write such thought-provoking stories, it just drags me in. And you masterfully capture cynicism and skepticism, making the atmosphere and Riley's feelings all the more realistic.

So, yes, you MUST continue this. Please further your idea, because when you stopped uploading this for KH I died a little inside. I really, really want to see how you can mold your own characters and situations into a story, now that I'm KIND of on fictionpress more.

You make me so jealous, you know that? You're such an awesome writer.

ILU, and write more and more and more, because I love your fics like crazy. ;D

Wow, HOW sad. Thats incredibly rude of the father, actually WORSE than that. That poor girl is apparently scarred for life.

Extremely well-written and awesome characterization. In a dark, morbid kind of way, this is a beautiful piece ^-^

Well done *adds to favorites after submitting this review*

wow this story was amazing!! You write very well