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| Blankppr 2008-07-02 ch 2,   | I'm interested. I want to read more. |
| Alenor 2008-07-02 ch 2, | hey, this is brilliant so far. can't wait for more ~ ALenor. |
| Dae 2007-11-18 ch 1, | I loved this! I don't care if it's cliche; I like your characters, and the story! PLEASE UPDATE! |
| T.H.E. Hero 2007-08-30 ch 1, | Your a great writer... I just wish you would write some thing that does not have to do with sex rape and things of that sort. Sorry it is the truth and only ONE persons apion. I spell bad. Sorry. Please come to my profile to understand what I say at the end. Because it is JAPANESE! @.@ Arigoto. Ja ne. |
| jane 2007-06-22 ch 1, | this story seems really cute. i hope you continue it |
| heysup.mosh 2007-05-06 ch 1, | i like this story :] keep going with it |
| merrymowmow 2007-03-21 ch 1, | I was wondering when you're going to update? |
| wandless 2007-03-05 ch 1, | Good story so far! I quite like it. You haven't updated in a while, please tell me you haven't abandoned it or left it to fade away on hiatus! Please update soon. |
| forbiddenlove13417 2007-02-28 ch 1, | Definitely an attention grabber (and in my case, an attetion keeper ;)Love the idea and how well the characters are portrayed. Update soon! |
| Alenor 2007-01-25 ch 1, | you'd think emi would realise parker liked her after that little happening but i suppose she's going to ignore the signs isn't she? ah well, cya later. |
| drownyouout 2007-01-23 ch 1, | Parker's cool(: hope to read another chapt soon |
| Osunale 2007-01-22 ch 1, | I love this beginning. You do an excellent job portraying both the characters as real and interesting people. There are some delightfully funny incidents (Oscar, for example) and some delicious natural angstness that isn't, you know, icky or overplayed. This is only the first chapter, but you've put enough into it that I already feel invested in the lives of Emi and Parker both. Please continue soon! |
| Joelene R. Gonzales 2007-01-22 ch 1, | Reviewed |
| PaintSunshine 2007-01-22 ch 1, | love it! hahah so funny |