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| randompoetry 2007-01-22 ch 1,   | I love this. It made me smile knowing I was your inspiration, I admit. I actually think its better than my original poem. The way you format your poems is perfect, it makes it easy to read and catch the meaning more. The words feel precise. I like the way it leads up to the ending, and how the ending feels. It's great, I like it a lot. |