Reviews for Stormy Weather - FictionPress.com

Red Masque 2007-02-19 ch 1,	I liked these two so much I didn't want this scene to end! There was something very beautiful and sympathetic that made me fall in love with both of them... thanks for this : ) rm
IlovetowriteSMP 2007-01-22 ch 1,	I enjoyed it. You made her sympathetic even despiter her occupation.
temerity 2007-01-22 ch 1,	Wonderful, wonderful work. You've subtly outlined two very stong characters here without making the details seem forced. Your dialogue is flowing and natural--as is the entire piece--and the characters, especially, capture the imagination...I'd love to get more of a peek into their minds. You could build a story off of these few paragraphs, but something tells me that it works even better when it's this length. Always write on!