Reviews for Sell Your Soul - FictionPress.com

The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-08-18 ch 1,	Whoa, that's powerful. I love your rhyming in this song, and your words! Truly a great song! I'd love to hear it's melody! Keep it up! The Reverse Edge Blade
Christian Baker 2007-02-23 ch 1,	I like it. Good rhyme; however maybe simply "ear" instead of "ears" in the first line, purly for the rhyme. And some formatting. something to tell the directions (like "chorus", "verse", etc.) from the actual lyrics. But a good song.
London Blaise 2007-01-22 ch 1,	I can definetly hear the musical quality of this piece, and I think the repetition you use is very effective. I do have one criticism - the second bolded line, where it says 'way to much', doesn't seem to fit the rest of the poem/song. It seems to belong to a different dialect than is used in the rest of this work. But your poem/song shows great potential - there's an urgency in the way this is written that I enjoyed very much.