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| FatHobbit 2007-03-19 ch 1,  | D'aw, so cute! This has a really nice atmosphere. The only things wrong with it are a few typos, and the abrupt transition from school to the park. Other than that, it's great. : > |
| TheMagicalMathPixie 2007-01-30 ch 1,  | Love it kimono3kitty! It's so sweet, and well written as always. I loved the part when Miriam asked Charles out, totally unexpected and nontraditional. Good job! |