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| souseiki 2007-11-10 ch 1,   | Whoa... I know it would sound lame if I said this piece was deep beyond reckoning but, it IS. I love how each rhyme holds its own moral and the imagery is perfect and abstract, and it all sounds so fluid and well thought up of. Loved it completely. Especially that runaway train part. ;) |
| Masaeus 2007-01-22 ch 1, | the echoes make the poem here, brilliant and blinding. i love the imagery also |