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Reviews For: eclectic acoustic

Artemis Anderson
2007-12-13
ch 1,
Aw..D: Sad...
Aquafied
2007-07-24
ch 2,
you know, this paints a perfect picture of a sweet christian girl that i know
except its a boy
funny how that works out
summerbee
2007-07-15
ch 2,
i have to say, i like the fiction version of this better. the poem seems disjointed and almost too image-filled for one short piece, beautiful images though they are.

the prose piece itself is lovely. you paint a very vivid picture of this girl's appearance and you let it, along with a few clues, hint to her personality. very well-done.
perdita's kiss
2007-07-15
ch 2,
ok i don't understand why i hadn't read the first part, but now that i've read these, they are both beutiful in their differences and their similarites. i want to try that now with some of my own work. this is inspiring, so thank you.
akaSummer
2007-01-27
ch 1,
I love it. I'd offer constructive criticism if I could, but...I can't.
Excellent detail, I love the way you describe her as "looking like a beach."
beyond.that.horizon
2007-01-27
ch 1,
how sad.
i feel like i'm looking at a mirror.

kudos.
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