hM... I love the flow of this piece and the setting and the concept. The only thing I couldn't get over was Angie's behavior. Perhaps it's because I don't think quite the same as your character but she just slightly peeved me. But, that's a minor complaint in this, overall, lovely fic!

you could have the title be "because i love you" since he says that to her during the one-shot

hey, i just read this oneshot and i love it! gahh and then i wasted a couple of hours reading fateful friday because you got me hooked. ;P the oneshot was great though i have to admit i liked alex much better after reading fateful friday. :)

that was cute:) adorable.

really:)

lavv it:)

Good short fic. Enough angst, but not too much. I haven't read Fateful Friday, but I might have to. I totaly got this story though.

It was good, really. And I should know, not having read Fateful Friday and also being the retarded person I am. So it's awesome. I don't think anything needs changing, to say the truth. And I know I'm just a stupid, crazy reader of yours who keeps giving wierd reviews, but I have this challenge for you, and well, I have to say, I don't even know if I have the right to propose it to you. It's just that I've tried a few times already, and I haven't succeeded. So I thought, you being the awesome author you are, you could probably do it, unlike me. So if you're ok with that, have nothing to do, or simply like a challenge (though it would be easy for you, I think, just pm me. Not that I think you would, you know. But even if you do, I'm not forcing you to wwrite anything. It's just something I haven't mastered yet and haven't really seen on fictionpress. And I'm not forcing you - dammit! A civilized person would have PMed you. Ah, well. That's me all ovre.

Much love,

Alex is such an idiot! but he's also really sweet. i really liked it!
charlotte

I haven;t read the previous one-shot, and this worked perfectly well. I loved it!!

...Wow.
That was really good. All my life, I'd been writing stories from that point of view. It wasn't until much later that I realized that I sucked at that and was much better at writing from the main character's point of view.
I envy you, You're good at both.

awesome again lol. i lyked reading about alex and angie again. ive fallen in luv with them lol. how sad ay?! oh well.

as i said b4, keep rockin;) lol

This was totally believable and in-character for both Angie and Alex, so props! Also, I liked seeing some of Alex's and Leslie's interaction--it filled in some of the backstory from Fateful Friday, about the way that they communicate. The only thing is, you spelled "pendant" wrong near the end. I thought you might want to know that.

Oh! Oh! I hate you. You can write.

It's amazing. Absolutely amazing. It's so sweet! Your style is flawless, it flows well and I can really get into it.
Amazing.
Your descriptions are also very vivid, I can easily picture what's happening.
I loved Angie in the sweatshirt with chocolate... That's a perfect picture, because, haven't we all done that?
Wow.

~Me

i enjoyed reading this a lot more than i did fateful friday. actually, i didn't even realize they were the same characters until the bottom.

i guess the reason i liked it more is because this is about a year after you began fateful friday, and i feel that your writing improved a lot.

i liked angie in this more than fateful friday.
even though this wasn't in her POV, she seemed more real?
i'm not sure.
but good work :)
even though you wrote this a year ago, also.
hahaha :D

I love this!
he is amazing staying true to her through everything.
This writing style is really good and from the guys point of view is really good. Your charecterisation is really great! it really makes you feel for the charecters. Especialy Alex!

Well, I read this as a standalone, but now I really want to read the whole thing. This was cute :-). Stupid Whats-her-face-slut.