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| alittlebitconfused 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abuseOh! Oh! I hate you. You can write. It's amazing. Absolutely amazing. It's so sweet! Your style is flawless, it flows well and I can really get into it. Amazing. Your descriptions are also very vivid, I can easily picture what's happening. I loved Angie in the sweatshirt with chocolate... That's a perfect picture, because, haven't we all done that? Wow. ~Me |
| annixie 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abusei enjoyed reading this a lot more than i did fateful friday. actually, i didn't even realize they were the same characters until the bottom. i guess the reason i liked it more is because this is about a year after you began fateful friday, and i feel that your writing improved a lot. i liked angie in this more than fateful friday. even though this wasn't in her POV, she seemed more real? i'm not sure. but good work :) even though you wrote this a year ago, also. hahaha :D |
| Mercury Fields 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI love this! he is amazing staying true to her through everything. This writing style is really good and from the guys point of view is really good. Your charecterisation is really great! it really makes you feel for the charecters. Especialy Alex! |
| Artemis of the Golden Apple 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseWell, I read this as a standalone, but now I really want to read the whole thing. This was cute :-). Stupid Whats-her-face-slut. |
| Stahlut 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abusethis was cool, i really liked it. and good job of getting into male perspective and the third person use was good as well. |
| shy green rock 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseIt was cute, but I suppose that this happened before the very end of Fateful Friday where she tells him that she loves him right? You did say that this was only the spring break of his first year? |
| x3life 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseaw i like alex!! =) hes the clique perfect boyfriendd. haha. lovedd the one-shott |
| pretentious fXXX 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abusei loved it...though i was worried they wldnt get back...n i think u did a gud job of the guy perspective...sometimes it seems like its a girl trying to write like a guy but here it was perfect...i want a boyfriend like Alex... |
| taylor 2007-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha.! i'm back. i had to read it. and, i did. and i very much liked it. i really do like the realtionship between the two of them. everyone knows that realtionships are piture perfect, you have to fight to get through it, and this really shows it. sorry for spelling and typing mistakes. wayy early for me to be up and typing.. but yes. i approve, very much so. not that you needed my approval, but you know what i mean, right? well. i am on to read more of your stuff. :] xoxo. taylor |
| angels and airwaves 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseLydia is such a skank! I got really riled up with her shameless seduction! :O I would've moped for the whole day if he didn't manage to win Angie back but HAPPY ENDING, so YAY! :D Well done! :) |
| crazygrl2468 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abusesoo cute. totally made my day =] |
| Ze Zellen 2007-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuse~sigh~ I love Alex. He is so cool! That Lydia person is a big fat slut! When she was straddling him, I was thinking 'Slap her, Alex! SLAP HER!!' Ahh. Fluff is the best, and you write it so well! It makes me happy... ~Ze Zellen~ |
| CanesFanCatty 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseaww, this was very cute! loved it! |
| soda.pop.fairy 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseSweet!! |
| EasilyDamaged 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseAw I loved this. :D |