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| Leaving Here 2007-06-11 ch 1,  | abuseaww. its like a terrible story, but ended with humor. its cute. liz |
| in a jar pk 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abusepretty words and a nice flow. i love this. x |
| Holly Rose E 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI love how it all conflicts and yet matches with one another. The words are brilliant, and the more I read it, the more I'm falling in love with the format. And the celery reference? Genius. It's amazing how a person can make something so bland and unpoetic something cherishable and prose-y. i love. |
| lackluster 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abusei remember reading this yesterday(sorry for the inconvenient timing...) and it was just amazingly sweet. something is odd about the celery reference, but the color depicted is brilliant. |