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| angel953 2008-02-26 ch 1,  | abuseUgh, I wish I couldn't relate to this one, but darnit I do. :( This is a really good piece...(about R.G. I presume?? hey who was the new person you were in love with in this...tell me at school.) ~angel953 |
| stephy151 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseThis LITERALLY brought tears to my eyes. It brought up old emotions that I had buried so deep down inside of myself, that they were slowly ripping me apart from the inside out. This showed me that I'm not alone, that I have to learn to deal with it, but that it's okay to feel like this. Thank You. |
| -insertsomethinguniquehere- 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this one. It makes me sad because i can relate. |
| VELVETxKISSES 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseomg, babe, that was amazing. i know EXACTLY how you feel unfortunately, and i understand how Todd was a bastard, i've dated two of them. i want you to know that i'm thinking about you and i'd give a huge freakin hug if i could! *HUGZ!* ~*Pix |
| Landon Stray 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE it. i can totally relate. |
| aridelaine 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good and really sad...good job! This is beautiful. Keep writing! |
| tsarevich alexei 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseah, lovely piece here. Heartbreaking, nice mental images, and then the last line was perfect for a finish it had the kick an ending needs to let the poem really stay with the reader. excellent job. |
| Shookie Smiles Sweetly 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseCompletely raw! I cannot count the times ive said many of those same words to myself. Beautiful poem. BRAVO! --Shookie Smiles Sweetly |
| Travis C. Eckert 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseI bet this is about Randy and that new guy. And it wouldn't be surprised if you did enjoy the pain. |
| Johnathen Braun 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuse:( very sad, but i can completely relate to this, nice work. |