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| Jukebox 2007-02-07 ch 1,   | I liked how the poem was all in short sentences. It really helped with the effect. Awesome job! |
| Shadows in the Fire 2007-01-24 ch 1, | Wow. I love the slow, sad style. Good job! |
| BrokenHeartedAngel 2007-01-24 ch 1, | wow this is really really good! good job! |
| jojoba-music-girl 2007-01-24 ch 1, | I like the fact that you've put everything in those short sentences. Very original! I liked it very much, keep it up! |
| ADSpencer 2007-01-23 ch 1, | I can relate to this very well. Nice poem. |
| Princess-anna57 2007-01-22 ch 1, | I could really feel the desperation in this poem, well done. Write on. ~Anna~ ^_^ |