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| Jukebox 2007-02-07 ch 1,   | Again, I liked the short sentences. (In one place, it was a bit longer. I didn't throw off the rhythm, though.) Very nice. |
| jojoba-music-girl 2007-01-24 ch 1, | Very good again! I'll put you under favourite authors, love your writing! |
| Princess-anna57 2007-01-22 ch 1, | Simple yet effective. Good work. Write on. ~Anna~ ^_^ |